All We Need Is Loveby
david1707Comment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
HAHA, yeah that's a LOT of LOVE LOL. Firat thing that I notice in this picture is issues with trying to blur the background in Photoshop. It just didn't work for you, it just didn't come off as natural and shows haloing around the edges.
Composition:
Not extremely powerful. For one the middle fingers flyin' in the air are a bit too close to the top of the photo and get lost up there. Move them down to about the top thirds line and it'd work well.
Subject:
The subject, which I think is more the fingers flyin' gets lost at it's current position.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color and lighting are good, but focus is a bit soft. As a rule, always apply a bit of USM after resize for a sharp shot.
To grow its vote?:
When you do edits like this, make sure they are complete before entering. If it looks unnatural or unfinished, voters are going to slam you.
Summary:
Even though it has flaws I really think it's funny as hell, especially with that title :-)
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy