Connections
by Sylva7

Comment by imagemakersphoto:
Nice vivid colors.

Connections
by Sylva7

Comment by GIS_boy:
A touch busy to work as a negative for me

Connections
by Sylva7

Comment by Kismet:
Could've focused more on the wires. Nice colors.

Connections
by Sylva7

Comment by taterbug:
Cool idea. This actually works really well as a 'negative', the wires and splices really stand out.

Connections
by Sylva7

Comment by Simpa:
surprisingly nice...

Natural Environment.
by Sylva7

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Is an interesting composition ... but doesn't really meet the challenge ... don't let that stop you from entering again ...

Composition:
I would like to see more of the person ... just a bit more face from behind the tree (that is if it was a portrait type) ... in a candid this you can't often control. This is an interesint crop but it feels like the tree is a barrier.

Subject:
Does not seem to meet the challenge. but that ain't the be all and end all of life really.

Technical (Colour and light):
I am one of the people who loves colour when it comes to shots taken in nature ... here the black and white seems a little much .. it works but I think colour would help.

To grow its vote?:
Well meeting the challenge helps .. if you have not sure about how to chekc the forums ..poeple quite often discuss the challenges in the week of entry.

Summary:
Lovely shot ... will be looking for more from you!

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Iron History
by Sylva7

Comment by dsidwell:
Superb juxtaposition of texture here. I like the contrasty tones, too.

Iron History
by Sylva7

Comment by Rebecca:
Great texture in this photo, nice clarity - the only thing that distracts is the white space in the upper left corner. It feels like you cut the corner off. I'd like to see the wall and stairs fill the entire frame.

Iron History
by Sylva7

Comment by MrXpress:
Very nice! The only thing that doesn't appeal to me is the overly bright sky in the upper left; I think it should have been toned down a little considering the drab look of the image, as it just stands out a little too much.

Iron History
by Sylva7

Comment by Tallbloke:
Great angle and textures.