La sciarpa rossa
by Rino63

Comment by mark214:
good and nice

La sciarpa rossa
by Rino63

Comment by michael_p:
Trying to understand what you were trying to achieve? Needs a little more saturation too.

La sciarpa rossa
by Rino63

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
Image here is way too dark. It's very hard to see the bottle and then the mug isn't exactly in the best angle either.
Try using more light and lowering the camera some to get a better shot.

Freedom is painting in the sky
by Rino63

Comment by yanko:
Good concept. The house in the lower corner is really not helping your shot.

Worship
by Rino63

Comment by jmlelii:
a good grab shot!

La sciarpa rossa
by Rino63

Comment by mngolfer:
What ever is showing up around the bottle looks VERY distracting.

La sciarpa rossa
by Rino63

Comment by lindes:
Is this a multiple or long exposure? There seems to be a "ghost" of a piece of fabric of some sort. Perhaps you mean for it to represent an "unveiling" or something, but to me, I find it distracting and confusing. :-/

Waiting the rain for the challenge
by Rino63

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: I'd really like to see this image shot at a different time of day. I see a hint of terrific color on the back of this chair, but that portion of the image is a bit underexposed, even with the fill flash.

Lighting: In a word: harsh. Your time of day created some hard and contrasting areas that battle for the eye's attention. Unfortunately, the subject isn't strong enough to hold the eye. My eye is pulled directly to the lower, left-hand corner, and there is nothing else in the frame to pull it away from there. The shadow created from the fill flash also created some awkward shadows of the chair and the foot.

Composition/Content: The main problem with the content is that there is no rain in an image entered into the rain challenge. The composition isn't bad, but I'd like to see it loosened up just a bit. Cropping this tight gives a cramped, boxed-in feeling instead of the relaxing feeling that the subject matter warrants.

My Opinion: Considering the challenge subject and the harsh lighting of the image, I think that this one scored near where it should have. Even leaving the subject as-is and making the needed lighting changes would have bumped this one up considerably in score.

Eric

La sciarpa rossa
by Rino63

Comment by justine:
Seems over all dark. Also the label isn't visible. Hard to sell if we don't know what beer.

Waiting the rain for the challenge
by Rino63

Comment by parallax:
LOL