Not now!!!!
by Rino63

Comment by jjstager2:
I don't get the title? Is that a glass door to the bedroom?

5th day of christmas ----- (Larus- 12 days of christmas)
by Rino63

Comment by LalliSig:
Honored you chose one of mine to pay tribue to :) I like that the lighting is more soft in this shot, makes it more a timeless photo than mine, a bit more artsy as well. Also cool you decided to duotone it, I was not sure when I chose to have mine in "color" (although it may as well have been sepia toned as all the colors in it was so similar). Nice job!

5th day of christmas ----- (Larus- 12 days of christmas)
by Rino63

Comment by h2:
this could be much sharper. tone is a bit off, too

Not now!!!!
by Rino63

Comment by jonfrommk:
Excellent faceless portrait, and I love the conversion which adds a level of distance between the viewer and the subject that compliments the shot well

5th day of christmas ----- (Larus- 12 days of christmas)
by Rino63

Comment by VitaminB:
I've always liked this shot... just find that the focus is a little soft here.

Vigna al sole
by Rino63

Comment by krnodil:
I thought "Italy" when I saw this during voting. :) This shot makes me feel the heat of the sun on my neck - really a superb impressionism treatment.

5th day of christmas ----- (Larus- 12 days of christmas)
by Rino63

Comment by LN13:
Although Larus' original is much sharper, this is nicely done. I more depth of field would have helped. You seem to lose focus on the finger tips.

5th day of christmas ----- (Larus- 12 days of christmas)
by Rino63

Comment by ZeppKash:
angle of the arms is all wrong, and the image doesn't have great focus.

Strasburgo
by Rino63

Comment by pixelpig:
I hope you will put some descriptions into these. They are interesting, I'm hoping to learn more about them.

Determination-Success is performed not by strength but by determination.
by Rino63

Comment by violinist123:
Critique Club feedback -

I'm not sure why this would have pulled a 4.8. The image is ok and it worksokwith your message. I would reference some of the other posters in the challenge and take some notes on how to place your text on the poster for more impact. The wording of your phrase is slightly odd, but I know this is not your native tounge (still it may be worth asking someone privately before the challenge justto be sure).

Overall I thought this was a decent entry. Good luck!