Best Friendby
PhotonurdComment by Artyste: Hello, and greetings from the Critique Club. What follows is my best attempt to Critique this photo from a DPC voter's point of view. I'll do my best, but please excuse any comments that may be unintentionally rude or insulting.
Initial Thoughts
Certainly a different take on the challenge, very bold.
Composition/Content
The composition is quite strong in my view, and the leading look of the dog makes you wonder just what has his attention. The model is very nice, complementing the black background and is almost.. sad, in a way. Like he's getting old, knows it, but fights on.
Background
Simple black background works, but the tight crop might have voters voting you a bit lower for the lack of any real studio environment.
Camera Work/Technical
Good use of DOF, really brings out the eyes, which are an amazing color. I don't know if they are artificially colored or not, but they really add strength to the black tones. I've certainly not seen color like this in a dog's eyes before, but that doesn't mean they don't exist. However it is, they're lovely.
Digital Processing
From the processing you mention, it seems everything was done pretty well. Maybe some slight over-sharpening in the eyebrow region, but nothing too distracting. The border is nice, but I, (and most voters from what I've noticed), tend to prefer even sides on a border all-around.
Fits the Challenge
It fits the challenge technically, but as in other photos I've seen and commented on, the close-up takes away from the "studio" feel, and some voters probably knocked you for that.
My Opinion of the Photo
A wonderful close up, showing great emotion in the animal and has a strong feel to it. Still lacks that elusive DPC "punch" that is often so important, but an image to be proud of nonetheless.