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| 05/01/2003 12:11:07 AM |
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| 04/30/2003 10:42:44 PM |
Anthesisby TarbiniComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Another excellent creation, Tarbini.
The first thing I noticed was the wonderful contrast between the purple flower and the green background. The green really accentuates the deep rich color of the petals, I think. I think it is also effective how the stem leads into the picture so that the flower is not centered, exactly. I do wonder what it would look like to be mirrored so that the stem leads left to right, instead of focusing on the flower then being led right, in effect taking the eyes down and out of the frame. The shallow depth of field also works wonderfully here. The background is obscured as to not be a distracting element, and provides a nice, natural looking "backdrop" for the flower.
The edge of the flowers is a bit soft, but I think that may just help make the center sharpness even more distinct.
You have done great work, and I can think of little else I would change. karmat
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| 04/30/2003 08:46:55 PM |
Another Timeby TarbiniComment by robbieh: I really like the soft focus here and the series of photos works well. I would hang this on my wall. |
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| 04/30/2003 06:32:08 PM |
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| 04/30/2003 03:02:39 PM |
The Ultimate Driving Machineby TarbiniComment by GreggeN: 3 Beemers so far and count - and a Benz. People just seem to want to show off their flashy motors... (sorry, I'm just a bit jealous) :)
I like the way you've caught the drops coming off the tyres here though. Gives the shot great movement. |
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| 04/30/2003 02:39:53 PM |
The Ultimate Driving Machineby TarbiniComment by adine: I like the rain splatters behind the car and the black against the pebble paving. Your BMW hubcap should be more central to the composition (see rule of thirds) Crop on the left to work better with the tail light (right now the cut is at an odd angle with the light) |
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| 04/30/2003 02:22:33 PM |
The Ultimate Driving Machineby TarbiniComment by pesinn: Is that water? BMW *is* the ultimate driving machine, but this shot doesn't do this automobile justice. Would have liked to see an action shot with motion and "stuff" - 4 |
| 04/30/2003 01:19:23 PM |
Another Timeby TarbiniComment by albright1: Wow..... I was just thinking that I like photos that tell stories, and this one does! That grass looks so soft and rich, and the background you chose is so mossy and flattering. This is among my favorites. Great work! |
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| 04/30/2003 01:00:51 PM |
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| 04/30/2003 09:02:42 AM |
Another Timeby TarbiniComment by jjbeguin: Very nice smooth composition with nice rendered textures. The framing is much to massive to my taste. I would have suggested to play with transparencies working with layers to build the framing |
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