Jonah Skylar!
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Comment by justine:
Nice shot, great crop and composition.

Jonah Skylar!
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Comment by hortopth:
great family pic

Jonah Skylar!
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Comment by La-Luna:
Great light, a very candid photo, perfect... 10

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Comment by kiwiness:
Original! The composition is very interesting and definitely an eye catcher!

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Comment by Gracious:
Great job!

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Comment by A Weaver:
Great Composition!!! The Red and Silver complement each other very well. Focus and depth of field are excellent.This picture is sharp and clearly in focus. The craftmanship is great, It is nicely placed and displayed in the frame. This picture really has a story, It reminds me of the vending machine guy opening the machine and seeing all the cans neatly placed. Great Picture!

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Comment by JPR:
wow. a winner for sure. amazing quality here. just excellent.

Watering the Lawn (without the watering can!)
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Comment by cpanaioti:
*Critique Club*

General: The first thing that comes to mind is 'cute'. Toddlers running around in the buff (or no) are usually quite funny.

Composition: Placement of your subject is good with him looking into the rest of the frame. The fence is a bit distracting though. It might of worked better if the fence were out of focus (less DOF).

Exposure: The exposure seems to be a little too much, probably 1/3 or 1/2 a stop. The child's shoulder and hair seem just slightly over exposed.

Impact: I believe you were attempting to get impact with the portrayed activity. Unfortunately it doesn't work here though it's a great family/'show to the first date' picture.

Keep your sense of humour and keep shooting.

Colette


Edited to correct spelling

Message edited by author 2003-07-23 22:29:18.

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Comment by rickhd13:
i don't get the contrast here...sorry

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Comment by Samara:
Congratulations - nice picture!