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Comment by annasense:
very creative! lovely!

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Comment by posthumous:
good expression of consternated wonder and the pages are nice and bready. 7

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Comment by margiemu:
funy idea! nice blur on the pages.

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Comment by Rebecca:
Cute idea! I think a dark background would work better. The motion is lost on the right side where the pages are in front of the white wall.

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Comment by locutus:
I think this is a great idea for a "blur" composition. With a little bit of work, the "great idea" could become a great photo. A few things I'd look to improve:
1. Framing: the 2 main elements of the photo - the book and the face - are both a little out of frame. I would have made sure that all of the book, at least, was in-frame.
2. Lighting: the lighting on the face is a little flat. I'd have tried to get a little more contrast happening on the face.
3. Focus: the crispest, best lit part of the composition is the shoulder; well away from what are (I assume) supposed to be the main elements - the face and the book. This draws my eye away from the main elements.

Don't get me wrong, it's a gresat idea, and there are some very good elements in the execution. The blur of the pages and the lighting on the book is well executed, and the expression on the face is just right. If you'd got a better result in the other areas that I mentioned, it would have been great.

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Comment by Judi:
Good work. Simple idea but effective.

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Comment by Melethia:
Good studio type shot of glass objects. Colors are nice, you kept detail in the clear edges, nothing seems blown.

The Glass Circus
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Comment by EarlBaker:
Good crisp shot. Lighting is a little harsh.

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Comment by SergeP:
simple and great colours and light. I would have been happy with the clown and one other animal...

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Comment by renefunk:
this is great, great lightining