Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by Jutilda:
I like the poem for sure. Nice PP work. I like that you are imaginative and don't worry about what others think. Keep it up.

Insomnia
by shalrath

Comment by Givemeashot:
Not really feeling this one... i like the holding on part...and the WWriting on the Wall is Great! the pose i think needs to be a little stronger. I like the processing of the picture as well some nice work here well done!

Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by Givemeashot:
Wow!! The Poem is really nice as well.... I like the picture ill pick on it first.. all i have to say is that blue thing in the alley way is kinda distracting. ButEvery thing else GREAT!! Love how the mood of the picture fit really well with the poem... VERY nice work!! I think the Words are positioned very well. I like it!

Insomnia
by shalrath

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
ok. heres a comment ya thread hog. lol j/k ;)
ok. I love how the words look like they are written on the wall and have dimension being lighter and darker in some spots. but the title? insomnia? doesnt make too much sense of that pose. "Holding on" works with the pose and the poem since you are ""holding on" to thoughts of that person for comfort. Know what I mean?
HTH

Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by Jaded_Housewife:

Originally posted by Germaine: LoL! after reading your other coment thats funny. I didnt even register the F word. just the mood and feel of the poem. i had to re-read it to see what he was talking about.

Hey! Look at my icon. I'm a female, just like you! LOL [/quote]

Whooops ::blushing:: Sorry!! I'll go fix it. ((hugs))

Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by gofer:
bro you kick ass

Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by Melethia:
Beautifully done, Dylan! I love the poem. I really think it would be awesome if you could get Erick to put it to music too - what a collaboration that would be. The photography works very well with the words. I love the sliver of the alleyway - how narrow the passage is. It really emphasizes what the picture and words are trying to say.

Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by thegrandwazoo:
Awesome man! I was writing the music in my head as I was reading. I got a melody and everything. KICK A$$!

Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by frandre:
i love the emotion, colour and words. i am not ofended by the one swear word as i see it relevant to the whole shot( i am also of the older generation) this geneartion is much more honest with themselves and what they feel. great job.

Treading Water
by shalrath

Comment by Germaine:

LoL! after reading your other coment thats funny. I didnt even register the F word. just the mood and feel of the poem. i had to re-read it to see what he was talking about. [/quote]

Hey! Look at my icon. I'm a female, just like you! LOL