Test Engineering
by paynekj

Comment by Harz_Joerg:
Nice view, good background and pretty sharp. Probably you could have made it more intersting if you would have worked with the light a little better and it would also have been nice if a few of the LEDs were on.

Speed Reading
by paynekj

Comment by Natasha:
Critique Club

This was one of the ideas I tried out, even with a slow shutter speed I found it hard to get the motion I was after. I think that you did a good job here. Your composition is good and the simple background works well. With a slightly slower shutter speed you might have got more motion and it could have been very effective. Perhaps if you play around with the shutter speed and also try using a colour book to add a bit more interest, you might find a great picture! Good Luck to you (yours looks better than my attempt!)

Test Engineering
by paynekj

Comment by Turbotech:
1)Does the photo fit the theme?(7)
2)Color:(7)
3)Composition:(5)
4)Focus:(6)
5)Background:(5)
6)Lighting:(6)

Overall Score:(6)

Commentary:
I am a little bothered by the composition of this photo graph. Why upside bown. I photo is good in itself. Clear good depth but I need Coke Bottle Glasses to see it correctly.

John (TurboTech)

Test Engineering
by paynekj

Comment by Fibre Optix:
Nice angle........

Speed Reading
by paynekj

Comment by chrysalis:
I bet alot of people missed the semi-translucent page. I did the first time. Good effect on that.

Speed Reading
by paynekj

Comment by GeneralE:
Even more impressive is that, unless that book's in Arabic, you're reading it from back-to-front!

Speed Reading
by paynekj

Comment by ChrisW123:
Should have blurred the pages more.

Speed Reading
by paynekj

Comment by Gordon:
A good idea, though I'd like to see it with an even slower shutter speed so the blur was more visible ?

Peeling Blue
by paynekj

Comment by FranziskaLang:
i like the 'by request' with the blue pencil on the white background the best. but then, i've been known to have a thing for white backgrounds! ;) good job in trying out the feedback!

Peeling Blue
by paynekj

Comment by GeneralE:
As I mentioned in a forum post, I like the grid background, but would have used a "non-repro blue" paste-up board.