Hunt and Peck
by gt7435b

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
My dad types like this .. it is cuter when this little one does it!!

Composition:
This is a really well balanced shot and the reflections from the screen are just magic against her face.

Subject:
Meets the challenge to me .. to some it doesn't ... but kids are really easy to get candids from as with this one she is sooooo increadibly focused on her challenge she probably never knew you were there.

Technical (Colour and light):
This is lovely .. one of the ones that does work as black and white .. but because of the subject colour would be fine as well ... as mentioned that reflection from the screen works wonders ... and the window behind hasn't blown too much.

To grow its vote?:
you played it well this time ... "oh my how cute vote" :) The percentage you got was great due to the amount of entries ...

Summary:
keep it up candids are hard and this is really good.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Old Barn
by gt7435b

Comment by puzzled:
Beautiful find of a building. The blown highlights in the sky hurt somewhat as they take the viewer's focus away from the bulding.

Hunt and Peck
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Comment by caba:
Nice light, cute

Hunt and Peck
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Comment by ihartnv9000:
Hmm... Looks like my sister when she was younger. Very cute:)

Hunt and Peck
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Comment by Azrifel:
Today I have been working on photographs from the 1950's. Many of those were about schoolchildren photographed in their '50s school environment. This looks very much like those, there's only this huge leap in technics. Instead of a table with an inkwell I now see a laptop. :)
Great shot, thanks for sharing.

Hunt and Peck
by gt7435b

Comment by quotestheraven:
Cute, but it looks posed.

Hunt and Peck
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Comment by CaseWriter21:
blurry but cute

Hunt and Peck
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Comment by sherpet:
This is just so cute.....

Hunt and Peck
by gt7435b

Comment by dahkota:
The ultimate in cuteness. Not your fault, she's just cute. :) The lighting makes the shot. You did well in the B&W conversion. Frame is heavy for me but who cares. Composition well done. 8 whoops - bump to 9

Hunt and Peck
by gt7435b

Comment by whiteroom:
how cute! good b/w