The Kindergarten Teacherby
scarbrdComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Wow .. fantastic .. a true environmental portrait ...
Composition:
This is one time wehre centred plays directly into the picture ... with your wifes eyes being on the thirds line this really is awesome. I love that you did not ask the kids to all sit still and play nice for the camera as this would have removed the 'environment' from the shot.
Subject:
Challenge met, exceeded and extremely well.
Technical (Colour and light):
The crispness of the colours is great .. the lighting works so as not to overtake the shot. I would give a copy to your wife for her to put on the classroom wall and they can see how good they look.
To grow its vote?:
This is so subjective .. I did not vote this whole challenge as too busy writing papers for work .. but really this epitomises I think what was being sought ...
Summary:
Awesome ... well shot, well composed and well .. fantastic score. Keep it up!!!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
Message edited by author 2006-05-27 04:19:53. 
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