This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by docvorhies:
Great expression and pose. Your use of field depth great. Nice shot

This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by Lucky:
cool shot

Falling wild flower
by fredahenry

Comment by kari1:

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Leading lines are good .. but this is really a very centred image with the break in the stems being the focus.

Composition:
Centred ... i think the best thing is to goodle rule of thirds .. and see what is said about it ... I normally have a URL but am not at home at the moment ... but it is a really good concept and really helps when setting up shots.

Subject:
It meets the challenge but i am like the other commentors .. where is the flower which is falling .. I would dearly like this in the image to complete it. You don't always have to thave the whole image there but in this case it really does feel like it is missing.

Technical (Colour and light):
The colours are lovely, and the lighting is good, but the focus feels a little soft.

To grow its vote?:
Include the crux of the image ... take a look at composition and how you can work to improve it.

Summary:
Good shot ... keep it up.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Falling wild flower
by fredahenry

Comment by kari1:

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Leading lines are good .. but this is really a very centred image with the break in the stems being the focus.

Composition:
Centred ... i think the best thing is to goodle rule of thirds .. and see what is said about it ... I normally have a URL but am not at home at the moment ... but it is a really good concept and really helps when setting up shots.

Subject:
It meets the challenge but i am like the other commentors .. where is the flower which is falling .. I would dearly like this in the image to complete it. You don't always have to thave the whole image there but in this case it really does feel like it is missing.

Technical (Colour and light):
The colours are lovely, and the lighting is good, but the focus feels a little soft.

To grow its vote?:
Include the crux of the image ... take a look at composition and how you can work to improve it.

Summary:
Good shot ... keep it up.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by Judi:
Beautiful image and grainwork.

This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by graphicfunk:
A very good capture! Bump.

This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by philup:
Great picture!

This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by geewhy:
I like the treatment you`ve given this image..it works very nicely.
I could see it being the pic on an album cover of the same name.
Nice work

This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by David Newland:
Nicely done.

This Boy ( Beatle album 1963)
by fredahenry

Comment by fandymaye:
beautiful