In the heat of anger.
by TNCameron

Comment by hanneke:
Hello, Greetings from the Critique Club. As requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

Please keep in mind this is a personal opinion. This is also my very first critique for the CC ;)

My first impression was a good one. Great visible textures.
The composition looks pretty good, though my eyes keep going to the lighter right part of the image. The sheet seems to look a bit too straight, a couple of wrinkles might have fitted better.
The subject is recognisable, and clear. Everybody has been angry once in a while ;)
Focus is spot on, and in a way you can see the textures of the hands and the sheet. That looks great! I'm not quite sure about the colors, the hands look a bit too red. Have you tried B&W with this image? Or maybe a B&W-layer, with an opacity of, let's say, 75%. But it all comes down to taste, and I think this is what you were looking for. The light might be a little brighter at the left side of the image.
The border seems to fit in this kind of image, but it's not my personal taste.

I like the fact you've tried something different then the "usual" heat. This is a unique idea for the challenge, and I think you did a great job overall.

I hope you've found this critique helpful. Good luck with future challenges!

Sky high
by TNCameron

Comment by sherpet:
Absolutely amazing....."WOW" factor for sure.....

Sky high
by TNCameron

Comment by hotpasta:
love this...well done, I hope you do well with this image

Sky high
by TNCameron

Comment by MWitt:
Great Shot!

Sky high
by TNCameron

Comment by DrAchoo:
Nice lighting. The harshness adds a good feel with the sky. I may have cropped a bit off the right. 7

Sky high
by TNCameron

Comment by Lerin:
awesome. colors look good
sky almost seems a bit grainy

Sky high
by TNCameron

Comment by BrianR:
Very graphic in design....6

Sky high
by TNCameron

Comment by Apee:
what happened to the sky !!!

In the heat of anger.
by TNCameron

Comment by Ivory:
I really like the fact you did something different. Not only is it unique here but its also well done. Bumping up.

The singer
by TNCameron

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Singer in a band .... interesting shot.

Composition:
Is fine for what it is .. but I think different angles could have provided better less flat perspective ... but is a candid and a good shot for it.

Subject:
it is missing the environment part of this challenge ... that is probably the issue.

Technical (Colour and light):
Black and white here is ok .. but colour may have enhanced the shot heaps .. as with colour lights and stuff from concerts really capture great in pics.

To grow its vote?:
Its all about trying new and different things .. you did good with this shot.

Summary:
Keep it up you got a good eye.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari