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Dan_CottleComment by fotomann_forever: ::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
RAWKS! ROCKS! Great shot and congrats on the top 20!
Composition:
Wonderful. Great use of negative space. This compostion just works.
Subject:
Nothing distracts me from the subject of this shot, always a good thing.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Pretty much technical perfection. Nothing I can tell you to improve this shot.
To grow its vote?:
It might have done better in the Single Light Source challenge, who knows? But, I really can't tell you of anything you could have done to get more votes on this shot.
Summary:
I can't tell you how good I think this photo is. It's just awesome! Good job and again congrats on the top 20 and your new personal best score!
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
Edit too add: Adding photo to my favorites.
Message edited by author 2006-06-10 00:27:50.