City at Sunset (Square Crop Challenge Revisited)
by Qiki

Comment by Neuferland:
Qiki? Retake of City Moorings? This is an improvement without a doubt. You can see more detail, the foreground isn't so cluttered. Very nice, but you still seem to having some focus or clarity issues. I didn't get a chance to vote on the original but if I had it would have gotten a 4 or 5, this one gets a 7 for improvement and effort :)

Forest Green
by Qiki

Comment by sherpet:
Great composition, and a great image as well.....

City at Sunset (Square Crop Challenge Revisited)
by Qiki

Comment by Judi:
Very nicely done.

Bells Rapid
by Qiki

Comment by sacredspirit:
An incredible photo! Pure, and simple. I love the desaturation.

City at Sunset (Square Crop Challenge Revisited)
by Qiki

Comment by Ragga2000:
Nice and clear...

City at Sunset (Square Crop Challenge Revisited)
by Qiki

Comment by sherpet:
I am not a lover of landscapes in a square format...

Edith Cowan University
by Qiki

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Terrific focus and nice depth of field. Everything in the frame is nicely seen and there is very little noise in the image.

Lighting: I don't think that the uneven lighting works very well with this image. The highlights produced on the right hand side of the frame pull the eye that way and compete with the nice composition.

Composition/Content: Very strong. Your cropping and leading lines work very well to move the eye through the frame. Without the competing highlights, the eye would flow nicely.

My Opinion: Very nice work in meeting the challenge very well. Very well seen. With a slight lighting change, this one would have been in the 6 range easily.

Eric

City at Sunset (Square Crop Challenge Revisited)
by Qiki

Comment by pineapple:
The focus is a bit wobbly, unless it is my eyes...

City at Sunset (Square Crop Challenge Revisited)
by Qiki

Comment by rayg544:
This is a tough shot. This is also a nice job of it! :) 8

Edith Cowan University
by Qiki

Comment by Makka:
Ahh....the ugliest building in Perth!! :)

I used to work at Harvey Norman in Joondalup opposite this eyesore whilst it was being built and I thought it was only half completed when someone told me it was actually finished! Who approves things like this I wonder?

You've done well with the photo though. The lighting is spot on and you've chosen a good section of it to frame. Good stuff Adrian!