Under the Christmas Treeby
YomiComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB COMMENT
by karmat
Composition -- The composition of this is really strong, I think because you stayed away from the center of the frame. The green "tree" things all lead to one point effectively guiding the eyes to the one focal point from anywhere in the frame. For some reason, though, I feel like it is almost too close to the top and right of the frame. Maybe if the focal point was moved in and down just a touch. But, then again, that is so minimal, it may just be me. I really like the way the straightness of the poles/supports contrasts with the "roundness" of the tree as well.
Technique -- The focus is wonderful as you can make out details all the way up and into the tree. Also the exposure is right on because the whites are bright, yet not blown out. Nothing I can suggest to make this better. It is a very well done picture. The simplicity of the colors is also very captivating.
Overall effect -- Though it is a very good picture, without the title, I would have been lost as to what I was looking at. Not that it matters, obviously, but I think sometimes if we choose subjects that our audience relate to immediately, they respond better. Having said that, the title is very appropriate, both for the picture and the season. This is one of those shots that makes me want to visit places and see the thing in person. (Just noticed you had nothing below 4, way to go. that has got to be a dpc record or something!)
