Honey Do List
by Yomi

Comment by ron:
it's cool how you stuck the pencil on the fidge, but I might have cleaned off the top of the fridge and arranged the stuff on it a little bit more. Also try a second light, even a flashlight, from the side and you might be surprised by the change it makes.

Honey Do List
by Yomi

Comment by Kavey:
The pencil feels like an add-on just to get it into the photograph.
I am not keen on the composition, I'd be interested in knowing how you made your decisions about what to include (the toilet/ kitchen roll on top) and what to exclude (the rest of the photo at the bottom).
On a visual level this photo just doesn't attract me, but I do applaud everyone for entering, and hope I am not too discouraging.
Feel free to PM me for discussion of my comment if you want to.
Kavey

Honey Do List
by Yomi

Comment by glyndour:
This is a good idea, but I don't really see a clear subject that stands out from the rest... perhaps it would work better if you cropped some of the foreground to focus more on the list....

Honey Do List
by Yomi

Comment by cdeluc:
why is there a roll of toilet paper on top of the fridge? ha ha