Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by ShutterPug:
The small size of image makes it difficult to assess. The image is over-exposed - thus the sky blown out. Seems to have a lot of noise too.

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by Konador:
I think the photo is a bit too small, and also seems to be very overexposed in the sky.

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by tonyv:
This doesn't grab me; and I think it is because it is so flat, and the lady looks like a tourist and not a mourner.

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by Artyste:
Use of the full 640 pixel limit is highly recommended.

Other than that, I don't really like the bright light in this.

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by NinjaMom:
This picture could be so powerful with more contrast and without the distracting blown out sky. 6

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by elee3009:
The message of the image has some merit. Some problems I see:
- you're shooting right at the sun, so the glare is very harsh
- it's too small and looks pixel-y
- the composition is overly busy (could you have gotten closer and to the side?)
- the grey tones are overly dominant here (some editing on contrast may have helped)

Hope this helps.

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by angela_packard:
8 from me....a little too washed out and seems slightly blurry...but I still like it!

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by ralph:
sizeis to small,the blow out in the upper left is to harsh
over all a bit soft

Goodbye
by Shiva Das

Comment by eschelar:
Blown out. A little crooked. Not in focus. Too small. Grainy. Indistinct.

And absolutely fittingly so.

A very good demonstration how technical perfection is not the same as emotional impact. Nice use of what I am guessing is a less than perfect medium.

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by Shiva Das

Comment by Germaine:
You've got a gritty urban picture here with a good range of tones. It's too bad you couldn't have gotten rid of that pole -- clone it or crop it out.