eggsperiments....
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Comment by PGerst:
Compositionally, its a little busy with the angle and the background, especially the chair and the hutch. I'm not sure if the BW conversion works well. Egg coloring is colorful, so I'm not sure what is gained by the conversion.

love triangle
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Comment by macwilyum:
soft silhouette works

lune a l'orange
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Comment by sfalice:
greetings from the Critique Club

Well, Posthumous, we meet again! I doubt I am the only one doing critiques in the Critique Club, so it must be pure chance.

Another of your abstracts that could be taken literally with its oranges and complimentary blues. But you chose to march to the beat of that other drummer again, and while some enjoyed your work, the scoring was downhill. However, I understand the scoring is not what you are after - and the Comment by Spooky11, the person from Belgium, whose English must have come painstakingly from the dictionary, surely made it all worthwhile.

Best regards,

Alice

PS For those worried about the word Macula. It can mean dense or densely packed cells.

Message edited by author 2010-04-07 19:59:18.

love triangle
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Comment by Ja-9:
for me either this needs to more OOF or it needs to be sharper...I do see your elements equally although

thoughtfully
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Comment by Pedxer:
Spock?

thoughtfully
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Comment by Timosaby:
A little oof, and nothing in there to tell a story. He looks more focused on doing something like homework rather than waiting.

thoughtfully
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Comment by Neat:
Great pic.

love triangle
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Comment by npasel:
Cool blue, interesting entry.

a glimpse of air
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Comment by dbordelon:
Exit?

love triangle
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Comment by TJinGuy:
The photo is not in focus. It is also too busy.