bird
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Comment by talj:
Lovely words Don. As far as the picture goes I would possibly have cropped about half an inch off the left handside to get rid of the bottom left han dcorner which for me is a little busy. Other than that the image appears to suit the poem and in thus serves its purpose.

bird
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Comment by posthumous:

Originally posted by messerschmitt: prob no use in a stock but i really like it i was wondering about thse fine words to it are these yours?

yes, that is my poem. Thank you! :)

bird
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Comment by messerschmitt:
prob no use in a stock but i really like it
i was wondering about thse fine words to it
are these yours?

she worries I will steal her soul
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Comment by TrynityRose:
The lighting seems a little flat and low. I know dark usually means mysterious but having an additional light just on her face or something to brighten it up and give more of a focal point may have helped bring some more drama to the shot. Also the shadow is a little distracting.

she worries I will steal her soul
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Comment by pamelasue:
too dark ... sorry

she worries I will steal her soul
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Comment by mmusicante:
Nice low-key shot... There's something really disturbing about her.
There is a couple of blue dots that need to be removed. 9 from me.

"I wandered lonely as a cloud" -Wordsworth
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Comment by Tanny:
Created a nice effect. Looks a nice place, then your eyes are lead in and it looks a little eiry as the mist moves in.

Great shot

Krypton on Fire
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Comment by LucidLotus:
I love the abstract nature of this. The colors are great, the focus looks good on parts of it, I do wish the depth was deeper or touched on more of the brownish areas. I like the contrast of the cool colors against the darker brown/blacks. Composition is good, the image is a tad busy which makes it difficult to find a place for my eye to rest but in an overall sense it works together nicely. I gave a 6

Krypton on Fire
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Comment by hideout:
Excellent abstract and fabulous textures. The ice blue color is so contrary to the challenge.

Krypton on Fire
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Comment by agenkin:
I don't understand what's going on in this shot, but the textures and the colours are interesting. 9