the shopper
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Comment by PennyStreet:
That shopper has been eternalized. Lucky him:)

Written in Wood
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Comment by tnun:
this is lovely. I want to have done it.

Wabi-sabi Wasabi
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Comment by herfotoman:
Westernised Japanese.. your'e right.

I do like it and it would be a much nicer print than mine....

Not sorry about the Brown, all's fair in Africa and war.

Wabi-sabi Wasabi
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Comment by tnun:
I can already feel my sinuses clear. an almost nightmare of fore and aft.

Light
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Comment by daisydavid:
Somewhat melancholy and filled with lament. I like the lonely openness, the detachment, the looking back and the final realisation of solitude. The imagery of the shaken off ceilings that give freedom at the cost of a loss is really a coherent message throughout. It is a deep inner fear that is exposed or a dreaded reality. I've had dreams such as these, albeit under the effects of (legal) hallucinatory medication, but I never related them in a poem. Maybe I'm right off the mark, but it works for me. Thank you.

Written in Wood
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Comment by kiwinick:
the thought is there and you can see the blue but sadlty others don't share the enthusiasm you do.
Its a situation I encounter in most challenges myself cheer up 5

Milkweed
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Comment by tnun:
you have made a fireworks!

Light
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Comment by 2mccs:
I love your poems. I wish I were a poet.

Milkweed
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Comment by grahamgator:
Reminds me of a sprinkler head, lol.

Light
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Comment by ubique:
I'm coming back to comment, if I can think of something to say. Just sit still and be patient. And stop looking out of the window.

No ... wait ... is this what happens when a restless mind ignores the teacher and instead looks out of the window? Yes?

These words? These pictures? These impermanent threads that stitch them into a quicksand quilt?

All right everybody, pencils down. Close your books. Now ... look out of the window.

Wake me when the bell rings.

Thank you.

Message edited by author 2017-11-11 10:53:55.