a question about falling
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Comment by basssman7:
too filtered. :( 3

Be & Flow
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Comment by psart:
I'm itchy crawley right now. nice shot. psart 8

Beaconing
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Comment by HeiSch:
I find it hard to comment on this picture. It took me a long while to see the child. There are so many lines criss-crossing in the shot that the viewer quickly gets lost, nothing to hold on to. May be if the child dropped something like a stuffed animal or so. Then there would be a story to tell.

Beaconing
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Comment by h2:
contrast is too high and the kid is just too small and too far at right side to make for an interesting subject

Be & Flow
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Comment by Emma_Rose:
very nice!

Beaconing
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Comment by Budya:
Very nice patterns and great tones.

Beaconing
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Comment by jonfrommk:
Lovely B&W conversion and quite a haunting picture. The hand stretching through the railings seems very plaintive (almost as if it is stretching out to either stop a parent leaving or grasping for a balloon that has slipped from its grasp.

Super shot 8

(498973) Hey, to da femmes, view a bust, unachieved
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Comment by MattO:
Greetings from the critique club. First let me tell you that I havent done a CC in a while, so when I logged in and got this, first thing I did was spit soda on the screen, so then I had to clean my screen. You are brave to put something like this in DPC as normally DPC doesnt have a sense of humor. You proved that they do. Based on advanced editing and you chose an expert editing challenge you were really under the gun to try and get the look. You were very creative with the paper and the sketching I'd like to have seen the sketching and the body line up a little better, but thats pretty tough to do. I also see a few places where over sharpening seem to be an issue. Overall given the challenge I think you did well.

a question about falling
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Comment by psart:
Neat image almost like a heavy fog. Great psart 7

a question about falling
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Comment by pearlseyes:
I like this for some reason. I think I would have cropped off some of the bottom left though.