Bread Manby
posthumousComment by glad2badad: Greetings from the Critique Club
First Impression
Cute! That's the first thing that honestly came to mind. :) Then comes "ta-da!" as it appears the bread man is making a grand entrance.
Looking Deeper
Yes, it's cute, clever, and all that, but there are some positive items here in the method of presentation. The positioning of objects are obviously well thought out. A nice play on angles with the basket coming across from the upper-left (nice leading line also BTW), and the cushioned furniture back coming across from the mid to upper-right. The way these lines intersect brings the viewer right into the main subject area, and quite naturally.
The technicals are all in place with nice DOF, good use of lighting, and a well focused subject. Read your notes...good use of exposure comp to handle it.
Looks like you had fun putting this together, and I certainly enjoyed taking another look at it. :-)
Questions? Let me know. Thanks.
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