Industrial Fishing
by tancredi

Comment by Cicarius:
It doesn't look like the first person is in focus. I would have set this a a focal point instead of the fence a meter or so in front of him. The idea is cool.

Marty

Industrial Fishing
by tancredi

Comment by Judi:
Nice work and different colours.

Industrial Fishing
by tancredi

Comment by Aghris:
Sorry, this is not bokeh. This is just a birdge out of focus.

Industrial Fishing
by tancredi

Comment by cconlin:
love the bridge. the bokeh makes it look hazy outside.

Industrial Fishing
by tancredi

Comment by cdownie:
The bridge and background are too in focus

Industrial Fishing
by tancredi

Comment by terje:
Like the composition, colors are nice too!

Good luck with your entry! :-)

Industrial Fishing
by tancredi

Comment by sherpet:
Looks a little blurred rather than "Bokeh"...

Rum and Beer
by tancredi

Comment by L o S T:
wow cool shot

orange flower
by tancredi

Comment by diablo2097:
Critique Club
Composition
Shot is very center oriented, which is a bit common, try to see if there's a different angle or composition which might make things a little bit more interesting. Also, the first thing that grabs my attention is the orange flowers. whilst the flowers are nice, the challenge is green, and so this makes the shot score much lower. It's also a bit flat, and i would have liked to seen a bit more contrast.

Technical
Image is very soft, and it seems you've focussed behind the flowers, and as such it makes the image very drab, as though the flowers grab your attention, theres no detail to hold the attention their. maybe a bit more dof to get the flowers into focus too

Post processing
No comments makes it hard to give feedback, so try to leave details of what you did next time. But basically it needs a lot more contrast. Some playing with selective colours would also be beneficial to bring out the colours you want.

Overall it's a great first submission, and i hope to see more :). I've been very direct and to the point in this critique, but don't take it as an insult, i just want to offer you more ways of improving.

orange flower
by tancredi

Comment by diablo2097:
Critique Club
Composition
Shot is very center oriented, which is a bit common, try to see if there's a different angle or composition which might make things a little bit more interesting. Also, the first thing that grabs my attention is the orange flowers. whilst the flowers are nice, the challenge is green, and so this makes the shot score much lower. It's also a bit flat, and i would have liked to seen a bit more contrast.

Technical
Image is very soft, and it seems you've focussed behind the flowers, and as such it makes the image very drab, as though the flowers grab your attention, theres no detail to hold the attention their. maybe a bit more dof to get the flowers into focus too

Post processing
No comments makes it hard to give feedback, so try to leave details of what you did next time. But basically it needs a lot more contrast. Some playing with selective colours would also be beneficial to bring out the colours you want.

Overall it's a great first submission, and i hope to see more :). I've been very direct and to the point in this critique, but don't take it as an insult, i just want to offer you more ways of improving.