Moose Crossing
by mariomel

Comment by stephan:
Greetings from the Critique Club, Mario :-)

Initial impact: I didn't understand the title, but now that I read the other comments I get it. Clever :-) But I don't think it's hard to recognise the objects in motion as bottles, when nto understanding the title.

Composition: Very good. I like the angle and the diagonal lines from the perspective.

Focus: The contrast between motion and stillness is great. I like how the bottles are rushing by. I think a panning shot wouldn't have worked that well.
The grain is ok. Actually I like it on this photo.

Lighting/Colours: The colours are nice. The green of the bottles vs. the brown of the machinery emphasises the contrast between motion and stillness even more.
I think it would look better without the red part of the bottles but it's not distracting. But the glare in the upper left part of the photo is.

Art: I like this photo. It conveys the motion topic very well. It's also a nice industry theme photo.


Stephan

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Comment by ClubJuggle:
Excellent shot that stands on its own, even without the challenge topic. A 10 straight away.

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Comment by bod:
Nice shot, and a good illustration of your occupation.
The background lets this down a little, maybe it could do with more light directed onto the backdrop to blow it out completely?

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Comment by DougPaz:
Nice shot, lighting and color are good and I like the way it meets the challenge. Only nit is the shadow behind the beer. DPz

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Comment by GeneralE:
I think I'd like your recipe, although I can't see a sprinkling of yeast on there -- I know it doesn't take much.

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Comment by CreativeDotCom:
Very cool! Nice photo, lighteing and well...just an overall great photo. Loving a good local brew myself, I give this an -8-!

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Comment by vw4lyfe:
I really like this pic it's really setup very well. - vw4lyfe (8)

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Comment by daxo:
great idea!

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Comment by gminish:
Very inventive and an excellent photo!

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Comment by bunnies:
nicely done