Shy
by mariomel

Comment by justine:
Cute idea and well done. I like this very much. Crop is a bit tight at the bottom but I think you've done a nice job.

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by Jacko:
neato. love the feet overlapping the edge of the frame . Maybe soften the edges of the feet a bit. Love the symmetry. Jacko. 10

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by SoulHunter74:
good composition, like the feet going out of the frame

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by shareinnc:
The border is a neat affect but I find it distracts the eye from the subject.

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Interesting shot... nicely composed, I like the way her upper arms and shoulders mirror her thighs. Lighting is possibly just a little harsh for my taste. I like the way the feet break out of the frame, but I think there is too much tension in them... the ankles need to look smoother I feel. 9

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by Alpine99:
love this image.. flesh tones are great.. texture in hair is spot on and I like the pose too..I like the symmetry.. so only possible quible.. it would have been good to have the feet in the same position as each other.. my only 10

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by SharQ:
The border kind of works, but pulls the entire attention away from the picture itself.

It looks as though she is a readhead and has freckles on her arms. If this is the case, I would like to argue that you have wasted a model with infinite potential - get in close, show her characteristics.

When that has been said, I must say that you have chosen an unconventional way to hide her nude parts - which is cool. Not at all sure about the lighting, though.

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by JPR:
i like the border work, but it needs a little fix on the masking around the feet. Interesting pose as well, and lighting, etc.

Shy
by mariomel

Comment by Pedro:
very sexy. love what you did with the border, even though many will chastise you for it. I think it's very appropriate. lighting is a little strong on the left, so it throws the balance off a bit. I like it.

Potential for Excitement
by mariomel

Comment by nborton:
even though its a speedometer, i don't get the sense of speed that i get from other pictures in this challenge. nothing is moving. outside of the challenge, the composition of the picture could be improved by having the dial more centered. the left side is not showing as much as the right.