Landing on Mars at Sunset
by bowhenn

Comment by YourBuddyFlo:
If the colours were very pronounced the picture would be very nice.

Landing on Mars at Sunset
by bowhenn

Comment by yourbuddyjhawk:
This image is a great shot although there is a bit of a dark spot in the bottom right corner.

Landing on Mars at Sunset
by bowhenn

Comment by Gunnsi:
To gray. No clear focus visible to me. Find it hard to look at this photo. Think it is because it is darker on the right side.

Landing on Mars at Sunset
by bowhenn

Comment by IceRock:
Nice color but really empty picture .. ice

Landing on Mars at Sunset
by bowhenn

Comment by talmy:
Nope, just a flat sky picture. Wish you better luck than I got for one of these on another recent challenge.

Landing on Mars at Sunset
by bowhenn

Comment by hotpasta:
great colours

A Sign of the Past, Making Way for Progress
by bowhenn

Comment by AzCKelly:
Very nice, love the idea and the stark blue of the sky really brings these two buildings out.

Color Wheel
by bowhenn

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

What an original idea. And an excellent choice of fruit to exemplify the primaries and secondary colors. Focus of the fruit and dishes is spot on. The light painting works well mostly. It's a bit dark (and that's where your score suffered, I think) and there are a few hot spots as well. It is fun, though to see the design in the middle.

Someone more experienced in lighting techniques than I, would have to tell you how to get the effect you want without the hot spots and the overly dark shadows. I can only commend you for a gallant attempt and a really great idea.

I hope you continue to enjoy DPChallange. I will look forward to seeing more of your work.

ALice

A Sign of the Past, Making Way for Progress
by bowhenn

Comment by gjumi:
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A Sign of the Past, Making Way for Progress
by bowhenn

Comment by Rikki:
Very nice juxtaposition of these two buildings :)