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The Doggie Derby
05/16/2007 03:56:09 PM
The Doggie Derby
by Ralphco

Comment by KaDi:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

I like the stop action on this sports shot. The image has a photojournalistic feel to it and would make an nice contribution to the local paper. I do agree with those commentors who said they'd like to see more of the handler in the image. It appears that you were shooting under crowded conditions and may have had little room to move one way or the other. I'm guessing that the minor distraction in the lower right corner belongs to something (or someone) that may have gotten in your way. Still, it's important, I think to avoid cutting people in half...and especially here where the main subject is interacting with her.

The setting is clear. The activity needs no further explanation than the photo provides. I like the blurry crowd of on-lookers. I especially like the cut out dogs in the background which echo the subject of the image.

Technically the shot is very well done. I think the color is a tad off...I took it into PhotoShop to check and found the whites could be a little brighter and the colorcast (a faint pink) lifted. It just adds that extra bit of pop to the image.

The dog itself might have had a better moment a fraction of a second later. With the attention of the dog on the trainer his gaze leeads us away from the feat. In a moment he would reach closer to the ground before landing, his tail might have raised a bit and his head turned in the direction of the camera. I know I'm being picky...but this type of situation is where I employ burst-mode to try and get the "decisive moment."

It appears to have been a difficult subject to shoot and I think you did a very good job of it. Fighting wind, clouds, and crowds while trying to capture a fast moving subject can't be a cake walk!

Nicely done!
Im on a road to nowhere
05/16/2007 03:47:33 PM
Im on a road to nowhere
by Ralphco

Comment by Oded:
come on inside
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Im on a road to nowhere
05/16/2007 08:48:05 AM
Im on a road to nowhere
by Ralphco

Comment by Retroesque:
The tilt and lack of apparent focus looses points from me.
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Im on a road to nowhere
05/16/2007 01:32:01 AM
Im on a road to nowhere
by Ralphco

Comment by ssodell:
A little dark. I wonder what desaturating the green and yellow would be like? Keeping the little bit of blue in the sky.
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The Doggie Derby
05/15/2007 07:34:19 AM
The Doggie Derby
by Ralphco

Comment by NicoleB76:
great action shot
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The Doggie Derby
05/12/2007 07:54:11 PM
The Doggie Derby
by Ralphco

Comment by bananashay:
I like that you included the crowd in the background, it gives context to this very nice shot. I'm curious to see how it would look if you moved a bit to the right to include all of the handler(?) in the shot, while still retaining the background of the other obstacles and spectators.
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The Doggie Derby
05/11/2007 05:01:21 PM
The Doggie Derby
by Ralphco

Comment by charliebaker:
great focus and action capture!
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The Doggie Derby
05/10/2007 10:12:41 PM
The Doggie Derby
by Ralphco

Comment by moolacoola:
I would have kept the dog-leader/trainer in the frame.
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The Doggie Derby
05/10/2007 12:54:46 AM
The Doggie Derby
by Ralphco

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Nice and sharp but the composition and background are too distracting
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The Doggie Derby
05/09/2007 08:16:41 PM
The Doggie Derby
by Ralphco

Comment by Elliottjms:
Go Dog Go. Not an easy task I have a sheltie that does this.
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