Tenants Required
by Kimberly75

Comment by tommyd65:
Hi. I think that this picture could use a little more post processing. I think more contrast would help, because it seems a little flat.

Tenants Required
by Kimberly75

Comment by sandabella:
Nicely composed shame the colours weren't a little richer

Tenants Required
by Kimberly75

Comment by dizzydean3:
boring

Tenants Required
by Kimberly75

Comment by jfwolpert:
this would really be great with the sun on the side of htis building

Tenants Required
by Kimberly75

Comment by KarenNfld:
Photo is a little dull and washed out but I like the composition and subject matter.

..Bill Henson..Paris Opera..
by Kimberly75

Comment by cpanaioti:
*** Critique Club ***

First impressions: This image seems to have a somber feel to it. This is probably due to the child's expression (intended or not)

Composition: The child is placed well in the frame with plenty of space for her to look into. Good use of negative space.

Exposure: Though I think you were going for a 'fade to black' look I feel the image a little underexposed. The skintone doesn't seem right. Good catchlight in the eyes.

Impact: The impact is gained from the child's expression and use of negative space.

Had I voted on this challenge I probably would have given it a 6.

Colette

..in the water & the flame
by Kimberly75

Comment by yourbuddyjhawk:
Its very good but it needs to be cropped ever so slightly.

..in the water & the flame
by Kimberly75

Comment by phreak:
good job with negative space

..in the water & the flame
by Kimberly75

Comment by parkej:
cool

..in the water & the flame
by Kimberly75

Comment by anindya:
fine capture.