Memories of a Ghost
by v5planet

Comment by tazza:
fantastic! Twilight zone stuff 10

Memories of a Ghost
by v5planet

Comment by mamba:
really good effect, though the light seems a little blown in some areas.

Memories of a Ghost
by v5planet

Comment by Strikeslip:
I like the contrast and blown areas. A very artistic shot, I think, well done!

Memories of a Ghost
by v5planet

Comment by sherpet:
I see a lot of blow outs in this one.

Memories of a Ghost
by v5planet

Comment by posthumous:
wonderful effect. you got skills. exciting composition, too. thank you for not putting the ghost on the "intersection of the thirds". I'll start this at 8.

Memories of a Ghost
by v5planet

Comment by Elaine:
There is too much contrast between the lights and the land and bench for me, too much detail is lost.

Draw
by v5planet

Comment by Breeee123:
Very cool shot - he looks ready to kick some ass, but somehow the picture is serene. Kind of a "Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon" quality to me. Beautiful but dangerous.

Fishing Before the Storm
by v5planet

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club.

You captured a very lovely image that has a painting like appeal to me. As stated in your own comments, this image has no clear main subject and thus, left the voters little to lock onto emotionally. Because of that, the pile of sand at the bottom left becomes a substitute main subject to the viewer's eyes for a short period of time due to its size and brightness. This might have scored better if you had cropped out the beach at the bottom portion of the image and placed the dock and the finger of beach next to it about 1/3 up from the bottom of the image. This would have given the image a focal point of the fishermen on the dock and the beach finger with the dock and beach finger acting as leading lines. You might also consider darkening the clouds just a bit to portray the storm aspect of your title better. As is, the clouds have about the same hue as the mountains and don't look all that threatening.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim

Fishing Before the Storm
by v5planet

Comment by skewsme:
Really nice hues, like the comp too.

Fishing Before the Storm
by v5planet

Comment by angela_packard:
it's a comin' better get the fishin in before it hits! great shot! i have to add this to my faves...wow...10