temple roof tiles wet in winter rain
by kenbo

Comment by ChrisW123:
Should have cropped out the top right corner.

clown & a dead soldier
by kenbo

Comment by kiwiness:
Great idea here! Two things I'd like to mention though. The bottle is fully in focus but the clown just a tad out, I would have set the aperture at a higher number. The lighting or the flash is glaring a little too much on the clown's leg, shoulder and face. However the composition is excellent. Good crop.

clown & a dead soldier
by kenbo

Comment by csb:
out of focus

Goddess of Mercy in winter outfit
by kenbo

Comment by Gracious:
Critique Club Comments by Grayce
The composition of this is very good, but the crop is a little too close to the head. I'd like to see a little room there.
Color saturation, and exposure are both good..
The subject is a little mysterious. Makes me wonder what this is all about, and why is it covered up? For that reason it draws the viewer in.
I don't find this very appealing, so I'm not really sure what else to say. I see others are quite fond of it, so it really is a matter of taste.
Just keep on enjoying your photography.
Regards,

Grayce

temple roof tiles wet in winter rain
by kenbo

Comment by Gordon:
almost seems a shame to have broken up this lovely pattern with the sky and details on the right

temple roof tiles wet in winter rain
by kenbo

Comment by Jean:
pity you didn't show a little more of the temple. Good picture nevertheless

temple roof tiles wet in winter rain
by kenbo

Comment by lennier:
I don't like the "blue" cast in this image, though I do like its rhythm.

temple roof tiles wet in winter rain
by kenbo

Comment by wingy:
I don't think we get enough of the edge of the roof in the top right corner to add to the shot. I'd either go wider and show more of the roof edge to give it more context, or else crop it to just the shingles themselves, which have enough pattern and color variation to stand completely on their own. I think I'd prefer the latter. And that white stripe at the bottom of the shot has got to go, although I assume it's there accidentally. Great subject though. A 9 or 10 with a better crop. But I'll give you an 8 because I could stare at those patterns all day even so.

clown & a dead soldier
by kenbo

Comment by Anachronite:
hocus focus :o)

clown & a dead soldier
by kenbo

Comment by Lustre:
The clown is a bit out of focus and the lighting looks too harsh (especially the reflection in his head). Other than that it's a good shot - nice composition. I don't quite get why the bottle and clown are in the one shot (perhaps I shoud recognise the title).