Clock tower through windowby
cresusComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Good picture, well taken .. a couple of distractions that need a little work.
Composition:
The picture is skewed mildly and I think rotatation to correct this would have helped .. there is a slant .. I am not sure that line you rotated this to previously .. but the tower itself the open window and the frame are not straight - and this struck me on first viewing during voting.
Getting in the whole window frame may have helped .. or pushing the window as wide as possible to remove destration of the dirty glass and the handle ... Just a couple of ideas.
Subject:
Meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
I thinnk these are fine, but going from the comments received you may no longer .. check out what happens when the contrast is upped .. I think it may kill the picture .. but you never know.
To grow its vote?:
Just play around and see what happens ...
Summary:
Keep on trying you are improving all the time ... can't wait to see more.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari