Beware of the monster
by Djabordjabor

Comment by davidus428:
focus was missed but nice idea 8

The death of a beatiful flower
by Djabordjabor

Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
This is a little dark for me but still a good photo..7

The death of a beatiful flower
by Djabordjabor

Comment by melismatica:
Very well done. The subject doesn't really make much of an impact on me, though. There isn't a real emotional connection for me in a contrived set-up like this --- it doesn't have any kind of connection to the human experience or any natural experience for that matter. Others will probably love it though.

Toys to the Extreme
by Djabordjabor

Comment by Neuferland:
Djabordjabor I presume? Very nice improvement over the original. The DOF is very shallow, bringing me to the driver, nice. The shot isn't as cluttered and the colors are very nicely done. And you removed that irritating passenger, LOL The original got a 5 from me, the Take Two gets an 8 for improvement and originality :)

The Past
by Djabordjabor

Comment by Drummerjd356:
Please email me at JeffDiMarco@gmail.com - I have a very important question to ask you about this photograph. Please contact me asap!! PLEASE.

Beware of the monster
by Djabordjabor

Comment by UNCLEBRO:
great idea.
and nearly perfectly executed.
My complaints:
the woman looks as though she's smiling, i think it would be better if she looked scared.
the "nudity", gloves and goggles are good, but maybe something else like a hat or painted face or even gloves that are more colorful?

No gravity
by Djabordjabor

Comment by Gunnsi:
People just don't get it is an empty room when they don't see allt the four walls.
Great picture and well within the scope of this challenge.

No gravity
by Djabordjabor

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: There is absolutely nothing that I can find technically wrong with this photograph. Your tones are spot on and your focus is crisp. Everything is the frame is well focused.

Lighting: Again, flawless. Your subjects are perfectly lit and the background is perfectly dark. It would be really hard to find something wrong with the lighting.

Composition/Content: Very interesting. I get a true sense of loneliness by what you put together here. Her body position and outstretched limbs grab the viewer's eye and pull it into the image.

My Opinion: There would be no reason for a DQ, but you didn't hit the challenge according to the voters' scoring. I think this image is terrific, and in a different challenge, it would have been near the top. Even outside the challenge parameters, I think it's much better than 5.13.

Eric

The death of a beatiful flower
by Djabordjabor

Comment by neenee1999:
This is a very creative shot. Great drama.

No gravity
by Djabordjabor

Comment by B74A:
Very nice picture but can't help to say two items, not one? Too pedantic maybe? Stand to be corrected for my interpretation of the challenge ...