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| 04/22/2006 01:57:50 PM |
All By Myselfby Sunshine86Comment by cfischl: Going for the grunge look are we? I would like it better if you stood out a little bit more. Another thing to consider is that there seems to be some perspective issues regarding the wall sof the house, as they seem to slope off (or maybe the building is just that dilapidated). This could easily be fixed however by going to Edit>Transfomr>Perspective. Just my two cents.
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| 04/22/2006 01:55:28 PM |
Smith Rocksby Sunshine86Comment by cfischl: I like this one alot. I think it would have been more impressive however if you had waited for some more dramatic or impressive clouds. |
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| 04/22/2006 02:57:34 AM |
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| 04/21/2006 12:26:51 PM |
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| 04/21/2006 11:05:44 AM |
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| 04/21/2006 10:39:22 AM |
Jump to the Skyby Sunshine86Comment by rich: Greetings from the critique club,
My first impressions of this shot were favorable - I know you already received some negative comments concerning the color shifting of the sky and the horizon line, and while I agree that the they could be toned down a little (the blue horizontal line is a little strong), I don't have a problem with the effect. I rather like it.
For the challenge in question, or even on its own, I think the model could stand some more drama in pose - they way she is standing there with her arms hanging, seems to make that part of the image feel kind of limp. The wings don't stand out much because of it either. If her arms had been outstretched for example, and maybe facing you or facing completely away might be an option. Experimenting with that would be fun.
Overall I think this is a good image with a surreal or fantasy edge to it. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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| 04/21/2006 09:42:42 AM |
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| 04/21/2006 06:41:42 AM |
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| 04/20/2006 10:53:21 PM |
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| 04/20/2006 08:28:47 PM |
Portrait of a Breakupby Sunshine86Comment by yanko: Love the look and that background really enhances this. I probably would remove her arm in the shot so that her white shirt just fills that corner. |
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