Real Love
by irish_princess87

Comment by kteach:
This might have made more of an impact if less of the words were hightlighted. You've used the shallow dof and lighting to key in on the important phrase very nicely, but it's hard to resist the urge to try to read all of the highlighted text.

Real Love
by irish_princess87

Comment by bennettjamie:
Im sorry, but you can't read the words, too blurry

Much practice makes messy music
by irish_princess87

Comment by nards656:
Somehow a little flat.

Much practice makes messy music
by irish_princess87

Comment by gjumi:
I wish this photo had a better control of the light, the reflection from the instrument is too strong, such that I gives me the impression that the setup wasn't prepared with the deserved attention.

Much practice makes messy music
by irish_princess87

Comment by glad2badad:
I like your approach to this overall. Couple of items that could use attention IMO are 1) the positioning of the flute is too close to a straight diagonal across the image, 2) the photo seems a little underexposed (the paper should be closer to white and brighter), and 3) the dark corner in the upper left is distracting.

All JMO of course. Good luck in the challenge.

Much practice makes messy music
by irish_princess87

Comment by bassbone:
I like the concept of this - showing the hard work of practicing an instrument, but the lighting is not very flattering to the music or to the flute.

Much practice makes messy music
by irish_princess87

Comment by shutterpuppy:
lighting needs work here.

Mirror, mirror on the wall...
by irish_princess87

Comment by DefyTime:
Creative shot...I like the tilt of the mirror

letter by candlelight
by irish_princess87

Comment by irish_princess87:
Sorry there was no writting. My family doesn't know how to write in caligraphy and plain print wouldn't have looked right with what I was trying to achieve.

letter by candlelight
by irish_princess87

Comment by pikwol:
mmm..now wherw are the words on the letter?