Reflections
by yourdealer

Comment by jonr:
Too chaotic. The knife and fork just mix up with the plaid material...

vrOOm
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Comment by wewillexplore:
Greetings from the Critique Club

The lighting on this image is fantastic. I like the details all around - but that's my only other real gripe. I wish that it was a tad sharper. Unsharp mask would have definitely improved the machinery feel of this. Machinery seems to me - hard, cold - and sharp. Not soft...if that makes sense.

Not sure the image meets the challenge for industrial. Also - try to use the whole 640 pixels on the long side to make your image as large as possible. If you need help resizing it, search the forums. :)

Happy shooting,
Matt

Reflections
by yourdealer

Comment by shaver:
To hard to see your subject here. Interesting idea, wish that it was better focused...

Reflections
by yourdealer

Comment by pacpinto:
Sorry, this looks too soft for me.

growingpains
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Comment by wetland:
Seems a bit cluttered. Hard to identify the subject of the shot.

vrOOm
by yourdealer

Comment by macrothing:
3 - Good potential. Criticism; needs to be at least 640 on one side, in this case height. More context and perhaps even 'straightening', would have made this better in my opinion. Like the toning, works well.

Reflections
by yourdealer

Comment by loseme:
The reflections are very demanding in the shot. I love the blue and white check as your choice, red might have been too strong.

growingpains
by yourdealer

Comment by mk:
For me, this photo really lacks a point of interest.

Reflections
by yourdealer

Comment by FranziskaLang:
To be honest, I'm having a hard time finding something to focus on. Maybe if one of the items was in sharp focus, it would be more pleasing to my eye.

vrOOm
by yourdealer

Comment by Andean-Condor:
i like the movement