Booze gluttony
by footfungas

Comment by cpanaioti:
*** Critique Club ***

First impressions: Good use of diagonals. Diagonal lines make an image more dynamic.

Exposure: Nothing seems blown out or too dark.

Composition: Good use of diagonals however a lot of the elements included are distracting. The plaid shirt (red is a very strong colour and draws the viewers attention), the very light blank area of the head, the empty space at the top. The bottle does not draw enough attention away from these other items.

Impact: There are too many things in the image that draw the viewers attention. It is best to have the main subject stand out the most. The bottle here fades into the picture rather than jumps out.

Using different items that aren't so distracting (plain shirt rather than plaid) could help draw the viewer's attention to the bottle rather than all over the image.

Good try for a first entry -- don't take the comments too hard.

Keep shooting.

Colette

Booze gluttony
by footfungas

Comment by byrongates:
Too set up.

Booze gluttony
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Comment by moniepenny:
bahaha, That's pretty funny. :D

Booze gluttony
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Comment by Gracechild7:
So, wait.... why the doll?

Booze gluttony
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Comment by allmcconnell:
to funny! very cute

Booze gluttony
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Comment by gjumi:
4

Booze gluttony
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Comment by serac:
Interesting choice of model...

Booze gluttony
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Comment by Len Scap:
The anonymous drunk...or is that perfume

Booze gluttony
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Comment by Misterbonus3:
cute

Booze gluttony
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Comment by LaMerry:
yay! I want what the doll is having...

Hehehe nice compo!