Lust in yellow
by flavioalima

Comment by swankFoto:
nice comp but isn't sharp and the saturation is off

Lust in yellow
by flavioalima

Comment by patriciavcunha:
The best one!

Lust in yellow
by flavioalima

Comment by KiwiShotz:
The colour treatment is strong, consistent and not stupidlooking. That's quite an achievement.

Old times
by flavioalima

Comment by nlghttrain:
there is nothgin really interesting in this shot, the horizon is very slanted and the colors are bland and washed out

Old times
by flavioalima

Comment by KiwiShotz:
Good exposure too since we can see that someone just painted around it

Old times
by flavioalima

Comment by tommyd65:
Hi. I like the mood of this picture. I wasn't sure about the tilt of the roof, but I think it works.

Old times
by flavioalima

Comment by IreneM:
I really like this for no particular reason - it's just very pleasing to the eye. Well done.

Mask
by flavioalima

Comment by sfalice:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Welcome to DPC. You now have completed your first Challenge. Congratulations. The first one is always the most difficult. And I sure do like the colors you chose.

You created an interesting picture here, but perhaps an unsettling one for our viewers. Your selection of this partial mask view may have left some folks wondering what else they should be looking for. But, of course, if you had photographed the entire mask, you might have run afoul of the "Other People's Art" rule. One of your commentors suggested a more symetrical view. Now that might work, too.

Your image comes across as soft. Even with IS, sometimes it's a good idea to brace your camera or use a tripod on these long exposures and 1/15th of a second really is a long exposure. If you don't want to use a tripod you might think of boosting your ISO from 50 to 100 or even 200.

All in all, I'd say this is a creditable first entry and I expect you will have a lot of fun with DPC in future challenges. I'll look forward to seeing more of your work.

Mask
by flavioalima

Comment by muypoetico:
interesting, want to see more of mask

Mask
by flavioalima

Comment by aquarian11:
Just Beautiful. Use of shades of color is magnificent. I will look forward to reading how it was done. 10