mmmh..yummy squares.... getting less with every shot!
by miss parker

Comment by Annida:
Hello from the Critique Club!

Subject:
YUMBO! This picture just makes me drool, you wouldn't believe how much; I'm a chocoholic, which means I can appreciate this shot a lot.

Composition:
I like it, I think if you had cropped it a bit closer to the packaging, you may have had a much tighter job there. Other than that, good job!

Background:
White, obviously. Not much more I can add there. It's not over exposed, it seems just right. The lighting is nice, and brings out the brownishness of the chocolate, and it's packaging.

I like the border, I think it fits. You also got a very decent score! The only fault I can find is that the focus is a bit fuzzy, maybe if you'd tried a touch closer or just a touch further away to get a better focus. A very yummy idea, very well executed! Thanks for submitting it.

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by Anachronite:
I would like to see the subjects a little closer... there's too much space in the center.. also, I am guessing you intended the soft focus here, but for this shot I don;t particularly care for the soft focus... it's so close it should be sharp and clear... but that may just be my personal taste... and also, this is a great idea for the challenge

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by Ricky Cleave:
its not that its not in focus, you shook when you hit the shutter. Faster shutter speed could have helped this.

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by Gracechild7:
Excellent composition. I really like this!

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by SleepingBeauty:
i see no point in this photo

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by JamieWillmott:
Looked great on the thumbnail. Looks over processed at full size. Shame, it is a really good image.

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by magnetic9999:
i would totally love this even more if not for what appears to be camera shake. maybe you did it on purpose but it doesnt add. im sure you were just trying to get a moving animal in the frame just so. i know how hard that can be. i have 2 cats :)

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by jeremycole:
Out of focus and shakey.

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by ChrisW123:
Too much empty space in the middle... should have zoomed out a little bit to more of the subjects. The lighting is nice.

?cat or flower cliche? - well I take the golden middle
by miss parker

Comment by thatguy:
Good idea. I like the tone that you used. I think i would have had a little less space in the middle but its still a good image.