LIFE--LEAF
by eggfox

Comment by KarenNfld:
Nice and bright, good lighting. Leaves seem a little soft, like they are not quite in focus.

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Comment by fotomann_forever:
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
I generally like zoom blur, but it isn't working for me here.

Composition:
Not the strongest. I think the lenscap being dead center of the photo really hurts the comp a lot.

Subject:
It ends up pretty much being the lenscap, when I thik you wanted the lens itself to be the subject.

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color is fine.
Focus is a tad soft, which happens in these types of shots.
Light: It's a bit harsh and blowing highlights everywhere. It's a nice artistic effect, but doesn't work here.

To grow its vote?:
Well, other than the issues above, camera related photos just don't score well at DPC.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy

LIFE--LEAF
by eggfox

Comment by sherpet:
Dramatic composition.....

LIFE--LEAF
by eggfox

Comment by FocusPoint:
Very nice photo :)

LIFE--LEAF
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Comment by Thai:
very nice

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Comment by GT350:
Interesting shot. The inconsistent lighting or motion on the barrel is distracting, IMO.

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Comment by nodster:
i wish.....

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Comment by Nikonian Ninja:
not sure i get it. sorry

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Comment by General:
like lighting,8

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Comment by ShutterPug:
The lighting appears too harsh and the focus too soft. Not sure if you were trying to convey a mood with the soft focus or if it was non-intentional but it just isnt doing anything for me.