Ether
by jimmythefish

Comment by MrAkamai:
Good use of the gradient/lighting!

Ether
by jimmythefish

Comment by Turbotech:
Well this is intresting. Good use of Negative space. Glad I did not do this. You would have had me beat

Yesterday's Game
by jimmythefish

Comment by PaulMdx:
Composition: Nice inclusion of subjects. I think I'd try to get an object more on a third, however.
Technical: Nice focus. Background matches the foreground colour a little too much.
Meets challenge: Yes.
Overall impression: Nicely done.

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Yesterday's Game
by jimmythefish

Comment by amsmyth:
this is an image where my overall feeling that sepia is over-used is irrelevant, it supports the mood of the photo very well

Yesterday's Game
by jimmythefish

Comment by muckpond:
I haven't checked ESPN today, but don't they still play baseball? Just kiddin'.

Oh yeah...nice photo. :)

Yesterday's Game
by jimmythefish

Comment by JTHermansen:
Subject is too dead on for my tastes. Baseball stands out to me, and I think it would look better if the baseball fit the rule of thirds

Yesterday's Game
by jimmythefish

Comment by justine:
This is nice. I love the composition. I think this shot would of benefited from some levels adjustment/burn tool. :) Good shooting.

Ether
by jimmythefish

Comment by christyrack:
I love it!! A great idea and a wonderful picture of negative space! :)

Together
by jimmythefish

Comment by e301:
from the critique club, Hi Jimmy

One of the best wedding photos I've ever seen. The detailing and contrat os first class - especially on the flowers. The highlighting of the rings is absolutely wonderful - this would win all sorts of competitions, I'm sure.

The reason it didn't win this one is because of the subject, obviously. Whilst it could quite happily be the future for many, it isn't specifically so. Can't say I'm sad about that - else you'd be way up above my shot :-)

Ed

Ether
by jimmythefish

Comment by StevePax:
The black and white works really well. It looks like he's holding up all the negative space. Congratulations. 9.