Sunrise Terrace
by carlo

Comment by captbender:
Good lines and comp. I like it!

Dark By Rain
by carlo

Comment by carlo:
Test

Sunrise Terrace
by carlo

Comment by posthumous:
I love this. It seems so mundane at first but quickly stuns me into submission with its profusion of lines. Ultimately, it refuses to be representational, even though you keep being reminded of its mundanity. It's an amazing conceptual high just looking at this picture. 10

Sunrise Terrace
by carlo

Comment by e301:
Like the observaqtion of those lines, and the capture of them - and you're right to include the watering can, as it gives reference to it all. The background through the fence probably lets it down - just brings it back to the humdrum too much, amkes the location too obvious, the composition too busy: such rhythmical compositions are often let down by the intrusion of the humdrum.

Sunrise Terrace
by carlo

Comment by whitewolf:
Great shot - Nice combination of zigs, zags, lines and light!

Sunrise Terrace
by carlo

Comment by escapetooz:
Interesting angle and use of lines. Not sure how much you changed in editing but I think the contrast could be higher because your darkest shade is in the back from the tree and I think something more in the foreground should be darker.

Dark By Rain
by carlo

Comment by ScotArt5:
The tree gets cut off at the right side. What if this was a landcscape format.

Dark By Rain
by carlo

Comment by KiwiShotz:
Great silhouette and mood but I don't feel rain in this shot

Dark By Rain
by carlo

Comment by melismatica:
The tree has a pleasing shape. The composition looks a tad cramped at the left edge to me. I don't know what the surrounding area was like but I feel like a horizontal frame might have been a more interesting choice. I feel like the tree needs some space on either side...the composition needs some expansiveness.

Dark By Rain
by carlo

Comment by veganmegan23:
awesome picture but i dont really see the connection to rain? i really like this though./