Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by atupdate:
The title doesn't fit the image. To be 10 spaces from Go you would be on Go To Jail (I think that is the square under the dice). This image could also use one of the game pieces in it to help it look like an active game. My suggestion would be to shoot from the Go corner with an equal number of squares on each side of Go and use a square crop. Put the game piece a couple of squares before Go and title it Collect $200 (USA game value, sorry). The square crop would give it a game board feel with some negative space in the upper right corner. I think the color of the dice could be a little richer also but I'm not sure which color/hue would need to be tweaked.

Low Tide
by Nuzzer

Comment by Rino63:
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Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by klstover:
I agree with the previous comment about the crop - either that, or just under the Y with a bit looser to the right. I like the positions of the dice on the board and relative to each other and the hotels/houses/motels/cities/plastic things. I also like how the plastic housey things are placed on the board - they are in the correct places but not 100% perfectly set. It makes me feel like somebody is actually playing a game, and not that this was a set-up shot, and I like that feeling of reality.

Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by Lorene:
I like the use of black and white while keeping the dice red. I think it might look better if you cropped it just below the Chance cards toward the top, avoiding distractions to the foreground/subject. This shot has a lot of potential to be cool.

Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by Lorene:
Nice idea, but this is yelling for some contrast.

Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by Tygerr:
Needs a bit of a boost in contrast (there's no real black or white in the image - all shades of gray), but otherwise a really nice photo.

Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by indy79:
nice, would've liked to see the dices more red (less grey)

Break
by Nuzzer

Comment by levyj413:
Nice interpretation, nice execution.

Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by TheHummer:
The board looks washed out and the die do not jump out at me.

Advance to GO
by Nuzzer

Comment by digitalknight:
Great creative - love this idea

Would love to see more contrast - whiter whites - blacker blacks - I think this would push your reds too - I would love to see those more saturated.

Maybe from a compositional standpoint, shoot so the lines of the board are at harsher angles to the edges of your frame and I think you'll find a stonger composition.

Great idea though - nice work.