Flower Girl
by escapetooz

Comment by escapetooz:
Hmmm... I thought I actually had one where I fixed her eyes... perhaps I uploaded the wrong one? She wasn't crying, she gets hives a lot... we aren't sure why.

I'm going to try and find my other version of this...

Flower Girl
by escapetooz

Comment by zardoz:
I like this, it has a lot of character. Her mischievous look and the peeping through the daises work really well together. A child̢۪s eye view for a child̢۪s story. The crop is unusual but works very well with the peeping theme. At first the red under her eyes bothered me, it looks like she may have been crying or maybe a touch of hay fever but upon reflection they add to the story the image tells. I think maybe a touch more contrast and sharpening would help a lot to make the image come alive and get the viewers attention straight away. This is one of those images that gets better the more you look, but with the current lack of contrast I think many people would pass it over and never see the story it tells. I would try and sharpen up the eyes in particular.

Mike

Message edited by author 2006-09-23 00:11:20.

The Secret of the Ooze
by escapetooz

Comment by TheBlackHatter:
Hey Nice Shot! Can you please tell me what that green stuff is PLEASE! How to make it or where to get it! Thanks! You Get A 10!!

Pinch
by escapetooz

Comment by ambaker:
Critique Club Review:

Lighting, color, exposure, saturation, hue, and contrast are all very well done.

Focus is excellent. Depth of field is good, though the lips start to go soft just a little bit early for me. Or maybe a little too late. The sharpness of the lips at the edge of the mouth on the left draws the eye right out of the frame. Either that, or move the model to the right so there is a little space between the lips and the edge.

The skin tones are great, as well as the rest of the compostion.

Overall, this is a very good picture and I could see it hanging in a gallery.

The Secret of the Ooze
by escapetooz

Comment by dfstevenson:
Would have been better if bottom had been cropped and arm elininated.

The Secret of the Ooze
by escapetooz

Comment by pipsqueak:
i like the black background

The Secret of the Ooze
by escapetooz

Comment by md8speed:
Doesn't scream chemistry to me, but still a technically well done photo and nice photo overall

The Secret of the Ooze
by escapetooz

Comment by littlegett:
nice fun stuff, nice image. just something about it doesn't pow me over.

The Secret of the Ooze
by escapetooz

Comment by KarenNfld:
In the thumbnail this looks awesome! But at full view it doesn't seem to be quite in focus which is really a shame.

The Secret of the Ooze
by escapetooz

Comment by pineapple:
Silicone I suppose. Well, it does look runny and suggest chemistry in some form or another.