Hungry Yet?
by escapetooz

Comment by psart:
NOt any more. lol psart

Hungry Yet?
by escapetooz

Comment by Tammer:
Well, before my eye saw the fly I thought, hey, that looks pretty tasty. Not sure how well this would go over if used for a possible advertisement. I like your composition and lighting...just not too keen on the fly.

Tammie
by escapetooz

Comment by TCGuru:
I like it!! I would like to see a bit more of her shirt in focus though, it is so lovely :) The colours work really well here as her hair is so dark and her shirt so very red :)

A Summer Afternoon
by escapetooz

Comment by levyj413:

Originally posted by escapetooz: I was going for an ad look. You can't see much? Hmm. Perhaps your monitor is dark because I can see both of their faces clearly on the dark and light side.

Then you succeeded wonderfully! :) Sorry - I cut my comment short. I can see their faces fine, although I'd like the shadows to be a bit brighter; I meant I can't see much detail in their hair.

A Summer Afternoon
by escapetooz

Comment by escapetooz:

Originally posted by levyj413: I'm getting a feeling of an ad from the pose, but I'd be curious what you were going for. They seem to be two pretty people posed in a somewhat awkward way to sell jeans or something. In other words, for whatever reason, I'm not getting any emotional connection between them. Aside from that, I'd like to see more light on the dark sides of their faces. I'm not one of the people who hates shadows, but I really can't see much.

I was going for an ad look. You can't see much? Hmm. Perhaps your monitor is dark because I can see both of their faces clearly on the dark and light side.

3: Blue
by escapetooz

Comment by levyj413:
The top photo could be an ad for a resort somewhere. Love the mid-dive, candid feel of it.

A Summer Afternoon
by escapetooz

Comment by levyj413:
I'm getting a feeling of an ad from the pose, but I'd be curious what you were going for. They seem to be two pretty people posed in a somewhat awkward way to sell jeans or something. In other words, for whatever reason, I'm not getting any emotional connection between them. Aside from that, I'd like to see more light on the dark sides of their faces. I'm not one of the people who hates shadows, but I really can't see much.

A Summer Afternoon
by escapetooz

Comment by ShannonLee:
look at you girl! pro status. this could so be an add for lucky jeans. i especially love that iron backdrop, adds so much to this. wonderrrrrrFULLL

Tammie
by escapetooz

Comment by lovethelight:
i love her expression, it feels like it has been neatimaged a bit too much though. i really like the details in her eyes

Tim
by escapetooz

Comment by lovethelight:
I feel like there could be more sharpness in the eyes. I really like the whisps of hair across his forhead