Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
As the stereotypical nerd, Frank's friends didn't believe him when he said he had a picnic date with a "smokin' hot babe". When the fire department arrived, all they found left of him was his pocket protector.

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Ja-9:
almost looks like something from the Twilight Zone...neat shot

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by bcrants:
great lighting- top 5

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Paul:
I had initially scored this an 8 but I have returned - it is better than that; such a story to be told here and the compositional elements are matched so well by your lighting and processing. Bumped to a 10. Special.

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by posthumous:
ooo creepy, great title

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Cinnamon_Girl:
This is eerie. Half eaten apple, knocked over bottles makes me wonder what happened to the picnickers (is that a word?) Seems like they left in a hurry!

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by kellmak10:
love the lighting or glow, or whatever it is!! looks dark and cheery all at the same time.

Dawn
by Tlee05

Comment by Paul:
I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.

Positives: I think the lighting on the face is pretty good and this area of the image would make for a very effective portrait; the rest of the image is very quirky- I don't regard that as a bad thing.

Critical stuff: The pose, the lighting, the clothing, the story, the background - all of these seem a little at odds with one another; in one way, there is inherent interest in that, in another it frustrates the viewer... I feel a little excluded from the image, my viewing experience is incomplete, I have become detached by being confounded.

Overall: Interesting but not fulfilling - if that is what you were going for, you have succeeded.

Dawn
by Tlee05

Comment by MinsoPhoto:
I think this would have been a really nice shot but the background is horrid. Maybe even hanging a white sheet would have helped.

Dawn
by Tlee05

Comment by Ja-9:
Not what I'd want to wake up to that...hmmm Focus seems to be soft and colors are a bit dull