Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Louis:
Not fine art for me, but does have me wondering what's so perfect about this day, and what all that smoke is, and where all the people have gone. I see Stella beer, and a bite out of an apple, and some bread or something, and a shoe. No people. I think you want me to think they are making love somewhere. Okay, I will. Technically a tad dark, the elements we are meant to concentrate on are a little obscured, the existence of the smoke is probably unnecessary (you just wanted to use that smoke machine). A higher vantage point, looking down at the residue of the couple, may have really helped this. The mystery of b/w would have added to it, for me. I don't connect.

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Jutilda:
the misty picnic
the magical day
one bite of apple
he and she rode away

the sweet grayed mare
walked slow
through the wood
they soaked up each moment
as only lovers could

each moment
each blink
they treasured them, oh
for never again
would this place be so

she withered away
from a broken heart
he wanders aimlessly
no ending no start

but smiles pour down
on their faces each time
they reminisce
of this picnic sublime

WOW - what an inspiration. I saw this and the verse just poured out of me. Stunning. 8

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by MinsoPhoto:
This shot has grown on me since my initial reaction. I love the fog and the brightness on the one side followed by the darker feel of the other. It really gives my eyes places to explore.

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by SoulJance:
really nice shot, though I really this that this should be one shot in a series telling a longer story. I would try to darken the sky a tad more add some more mystery.

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Pug-H:
It seems the picnickers have been abducted by aliens. ;=9

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by Lutchenko:
what really makes this picture is the lack of people. almost as if we are seeing the aftremath of something terrible. Nice work

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by skewsme:
interesting story

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by ThingFish:
Hmmmm...a mystery. Where are the happy picnicking couple? Abducted by aliens? Did a murder most foul take place here? Or are they perhaps being passionate in the undergrowth? Whatever...it's a beautifully executed image with wonderful lighting.

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by odriew:
Wonderful story. 9

Perfect Day
by Tlee05

Comment by wheeledd:
Has the fog swallowed up the picnickers after someone took just one bite of the apple? The image suggests lots of possible stories. Very Good!