I'll have another one, thank you
by olbol

Comment by oldbimmercoupe:
gold blue and copper?

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by olbol

Comment by IAmEliKatz:
Love the color.

Message edited by author 2011-03-14 08:22:55.

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by olbol

Comment by Neat:
Lovely abstract, the colours turned out magnificent, all the best, could be a ribbon winner.

I'll have another one, thank you
by olbol

Comment by EL-ROI:
Well represented. I can tell the man ordering is already half in the bag!

I'll have another one, thank you
by olbol

Comment by jomari:
Nice work with the colours and the lighting.

Cobwebbed
by olbol

Comment by PennyStreet:
Nice idea. Better picture. This really works compositionally and the colors make it even more interesting. Love the textures of the cobwebs.

Cobwebbed
by olbol

Comment by Tiny:
Nice image.

Cobwebbed
by olbol

Comment by sfalice:
Very good seeing here.

Cobwebbed
by olbol

Comment by daisydavid:
interesting subject, yucky colour

Nebula
by olbol

Comment by MinsoPhoto:
Greetings from the Critique Club

First Impressions:

This is a cool looking abstract but I don’t know what I am looking at.

Technical (Comp, lighting, color, focus, Processing):

The composition works well for this shot and I like how you have different shapes and colors going on throughout the image.

The lighting seems a bit weird, not bad but I am guessing this is just the natural light on the subject. I would like to see a bit more lighting to give this image some pop and a bit of contrast.

The colors are nice sea tones but they could use a little boost to really grab my attention, nothing over the top just maybe a bit of saturation.

I don’t really see any issues with the focus at all. As for your processing it doesn’t look like you really did much. All I would suggest is to try and bring out the colors a touch and get more contrast in the shot.

Challenge:

Meets the challenge but I think some voters didn’t get what they were looking at and I don’t think your title really helped much.

Artistic/Emotion:

This was a nice abstract and a different take on the subject. It is always nice seeing different views on a challenge.

Summary:

This shot was pretty well done but it could use a boost to grab the voter’s attention. In a challenge with so many vibrant landscapes this, sadly, is just lost in the mix. You got a few good votes I am guessing from voters who appreciate the abstract. In the end this finished about where I would expect it to on DPC. A solid 5 to me is a good shot that just lacks impact or a shot that doesn’t fit in the DPC mold. I encourage you to keep up with the different views on the challenge and just work a bit on some technical issues.