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Mirror? Twin? Your Guess!!!!by RaindropComment by inspzil: Greetings from the Critique Club -
By Inspzil
Composition - Nice color on this pair of birds. I like the way they are arranged, looking like parakeet conjoined twins at the beak. The general composition is pretty good, the only thing I don't like is the really tight crop. It would be a little better if they weren't so crowded at the top of the pic.
Technical - This picture would've done much much better if it were just a little sharper. It's not bad, but anything but perfect on something like this with this much detail, like the feathers, is certain to bump you down a couple notches here on dpc. It may be from compression as much as anything else. The shutter speed at 1/50s may have some part of that too. I don't know why it needed to be that long with the flash firing. I prefer not to use flash unless I absolutely have to, but this picture looks like it couldn't have been taken without it. In terms of processing, it looks like you could've tried to sharpen the pic a bit to give it a little better appearance. It may have added a little noise but sometimes you gotta take the good with the bad.
Overall - Not a bad picture by any means, and actually a pretty good concept. I'm a little hesitant about calling this cliche, but I could see where that's coming from. The photography end of it is where this photo could use the most improvement. Maybe a tripod would've been more effective. Giving the birds a little more headroom in the pic would be better as well. Good luck in future challenges - Inspzil |
| 02/10/2003 01:50:25 PM |
Mirror? Twin? Your Guess!!!!by RaindropComment by Raindrop: Of course they are twins. They are about 4 weeks old in the picture. It was easy to get them to cooperate because they love each other.
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